_parfois (_parfois) wrote in art_is_insanity,

Body Politics. A story.

I'm working on a story for creative writing class and I'd really appreciate some feedback on it. I'd post it here but part of the assignment is to discuss how useful others' myspace comments were in arriving at a final draft (ahem, Stewart Home is my teacher this semester, if any of you know who that is...), and so any response has to be documented there.

If anyone has the time, I'd be eternally grateful...

It's under 'Why women are the weaker sex (assignment 4)' on http://www.myspace.com/artssake 

Arigato x

Also, add me on myspace! I've just joined really and am quite impoverished in the friend department...
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